A few weeks ago we got to use the i-pods to take a photo and write about it. We had to include onomatopoeia and similies in our writing. Lois wrote one which we have published here...
i-pod writing
Flip flop, I flip on the bars.
Crash bang, I roll and swing.
Wheeeee, I flip over the bars.
Wooooah, I say when I go fast.
Ping pong, ping pong, goes the metal.
Eeeeeeee, when it's too dry.
Slip slop, I go if it's slippery.
The bar is as blue as the sky.
It is as slippery as cream.
By Lois Yen.
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